Thread:Yossipossi/@comment-28928032-20161204053540/@comment-26242189-20161204054705

It's pretty good, and I think it's pretty funny. I would reccomend removing the sniper rifle and instead replacing it with a, say "rifle bow", mainly because technology wasn't nessisarily very advanced in the underground ~100 years before Frisk fell. Also, I can correct some grammar and spelling if you'd like.