Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-34809176-20180323025540/@comment-34822941-20180515233409

My Criticism(Following Ash's instructions):

I don't think this RP will last, or even start, if I'm going to be totally honest with you. The general idea behind it isn't mentioned, and you didn't list the characters even available, or whether or not OCs are allowed. Here are some suggestions for the future:

1. Try working on your grammar, spacing, and spelling. As Skelebros said, writing like that is hard to understand, so you should try to study, so when you try again people can understand you more.

2. List the basic topic of the RP Thread, as well as the characters availabale.

3. Say whether or not OCs are allowed.

If you follow these suggestions, you might be able to create a successful RP thread in the future.