Talk:Lil Olpav Floqour/@comment-27311835-20160409223622/@comment-27775520-20160422011653

Tem, the things that made it fall made it better. And the stuff that dropped were because the backstory and everything else seemed unwell with a undertale universe. I mean they had a wolf form. It seemed really (Smart word for stupid here). Also your oc's need some fixing.