Talk:Worcestershire/@comment-25726032-20170304004124

Time for Episode 1 of Forge's Review. This time, I will use okay signs. Alright, let's go!

Length/Completion/Format: 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌, 10/10. The page is all the way complete for sure, no headings or spots left blank in particular. It's a really nice length too (Only painful at the huge amount of relationships). The formatting is also spot-on like most other pages.

Design/Concept: 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌, 7/10. The page's concept of an owl in Undertale isn't the newest, but it's certainly the best out of the ones I've seen so far. Since he's a thief, I actually picture him as a young, alive version of Clockwerk from Sly Cooper. Being an angsty teen however is a bit meh for me, and the absence of a picture keeps me from imagining a clear picture. The additions of night vision and talons haven't really been tapped on much before however, so I'll give you credit for that. Good design!

Plot/Backstory:  👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌, 8/10. Like most other pages, this one suffers the inevitable cliche of being orphaned. But I can't really blame you, it's such an easy and effective backstory trope. I will say however, the parents being arrested is a more unique approach than having them die like most other times. It's a completely reasonable and good backstory in the context of the Condiment Crew, and it's great.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:  👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌, 10/10. Like most pages, it's got all the great grammar and shit. Not much more to go into than this.

RP Applicability:  👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌, 10/10. He certainly has the capability to carry a plot in two ways. One way with his Condiment Crew affiliations, and another way with his personality and foster home. He also has the perfect capabilities of being a side character too, able to participate in a normal RP without flipping it upside down essentially.

Overall... it's a 9.4 out of 10! It's a great page, and you can't really go much further without creating a perfectly original backstory and trying VERY hard with the design. Another classic, my man.