Thread:TheSecondEdgeOfTheBlade/@comment-30125172-20161005101611/@comment-26273552-20161006220812

Oh goodness. That's a long page. Bigger than my own. Great job!

Some tips:
 * Relationships like friendships with canon characters are typically frowned upon here, though they are not strictly outlawed.
 * Description is usually physical and personality description. Maybe move some of that to a History section?
 * If you would like, you can give the species their own page.
 * Your Abilities section is a bit big, but depending on how you play the character, this could still be acceptable.
 * Stats are certainly on the high side, but same as above.

Overall, I encourage you to keep going to build this character up. Just keep in mind that you don't want to get overpowered.