Talk:Anyu/@comment-25726032-20170310140633

What is up guys, it's yo boi Snacky Forge, and today we're doing another LEGIIIT Page Review. This time I'm reviewing this smol child, and I'll be using hand emojis. The rating depends on how positive or negative the gesture is. Alright, let's get right into the news!

Length/Completion/Format:  👌, 10/10. I was going to consider a 9/10, but nah, it's all good. The page length is good for such an OC, the format is correct, and all of the headings are complete. I would like to suggest more of an elaboration on her Description, and adding to the infobox.

Design/Concept: 👍, 9/10. The design as a whole is unique enough and her personality is also all good. Her attacks could be rather interesting too. But, I would like to say that once again as a suggestion, a bit more is added to her appearance. Maybe elaborate on her Genocide stats.

Plot/Backstory: 👍, 9/10. Finally, a backstory where the parents don't lose the OC, or the other way around. Well... the parents still lose a child, but at least we don't have another loner here. The backstory is detailed, and aside from the cliche, it's actually a really unique backstory for such a child. Good work, man.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: ✌️, 8/10. While the grammar and punctuation are completely fine, I've seen a number of spelling errors in the page, mostly typing errors. While I've fixed a few, there are still a few present. I suggest you fix those spelling errors, then this can be a 10/10. Not any sooner.

RP Applicability: ✌️, 8/10. Since she's a smol child, she could basically join in on any RP she pleases, which makes her easily applicable. The thing is, she doesn't really carry a heavy plot like others can. Sure, there's her parents, but that's not much of a plot, really. It's all fine though, it's no biggie.

Overall, it's a 9.4/10. Anyu's a good OC, but there are some minor fixes and additions that could be made to bring her score up even higher. While child OCs are never really my favorite, this was still a good read, and I think you did well! Nice job! 👍