Thread:TheSecondEdgeOfTheBlade/@comment-31199791-20161212143923/@comment-29738898-20161212203059

I've checked the page (was given permission).

And I have to say, your page doesn't meet the page requirements, just by a slim jim.

The page is over all, overpowered, too short, universe jumping, canon breaking, and gaster blasters.

I would recommend working on the backstory, removing the "Alien invasion", and universe jumping part. I recommend having the character originating in the undertale universe, and not from some other universe who traveled through some rift in space to get there.

The abilities are okay, seem a bit "Forced in and not natural". But the gaster blasters have to go, as they're breaking one of the wiki's rules. I highly recommend checking out This before you continue.

Besides from that, the "Created a new body for chara" part is completely absurd, and canon breaking. So I recommend reworking on the relationship.

The page has to largely be expanded on, and fixed to meet the undertale roleplay wikia's standards. You can ask other users if you want some advice on what to do.