Thread:Golden Forge/@comment-37426343-20181113144526/@comment-25726032-20181119022303

Sorry for not getting to this sooner, I kinda forgot that this was in my notifications.

Alright, so I think it'd be preferable if you made her fully Human. You don't need to describe her battles and stuff, just describe what she's like in the AU, what her motivations are, what she does, etc. You could look at some of the current character paragraphs in the AU as templates. Your page itself seems fine, so provided that it doesn't get marked you should be fine.