Board Thread:Roleplaying Boards/@comment-26515138-20160719013142/@comment-27707679-20160722120319

(Normally, I don't get invovled because I dont think multiple people telling one person the same thing does not help, but it's not really working so here I go, and I really am trying to be nice about this. Blaster, you need to fix a lot of things. As per rules, dont upload another artists picture without permission. I'm not sure if you ever did get permission from the deviant you got the picture from, but if you did, apologies for assuming you did not have any. However, in the case you did not be granted permission, it's best to take the picture down, and just draw something yourself. Now for your OC itself, he at least needs a suitable backstory, and powers and abilities that make sense. Usually, studying timelines is looked down upon because only certain people (meaning CANON characters) can do that, so do not put that down. He needs more than just that he was forgotten, and you cannot just leave cryptic messages to everything because you may as well leave everything blank because no one knows any information about him. Look, characters in the roleplay dont need to know everything about him, but everyon, out of roleplay, should, so we can determine whether or not the character is okay, or how they are so there are no surprises. And finally, no sudden headcanons of anything, or trying to take a rolelay in an absurd direction.)

Adelaide, as a (rather old) machine herself, would know where some items were. As a catalyst for light, she merely plucked out a crystal from the cave, and continued to look. She collected items off of the list, exploring the underground. She never realized how different things were in the past.