Talk:Currod-Upted/@comment-26273552-20160508010836

Rating as requested

Writing : ★★☆☆☆ Length : ★★★*☆ Format : ★★☆☆☆ Design : ★★★☆☆
 * Running sentences with far too many commas. End your thoughts already.
 * Unnecessary capitalization in areas.
 * "as I can morph", and if there's any more errors like that in there.
 * Awkward grammar in sections.
 * Redundant use of descriptors such as "blackish".
 * It's a good length for a quick read, but there should be some more length for it to get more stars.
 * The Template at the top is a nice idea, but its construction is executed poorly, and it seems very lopsided - Visually unappealing
 * Description heading should include both appearance and personality, history should be a separate heading underneath.
 * Interesting concept.
 * Allows for a bit too much interpretation.

Final Notes:

First and foremost: Fix the grammar and punctuation errors. Other than that, go into more detail on everything. I can guarantee people aren't going to complain about a more crystal clear idea of what they should be envisioning.