Talk:Menschlichesreptil/@comment-26273552-20170904113504

 Rating as requested  Writing : ★★☆☆☆ Length : ★★★☆☆ Format : ★★☆☆☆ Design : ★★★☆☆ Final Notes:
 * This writing is jarring to read, and conveys neither a professional tone, nor a natural cadence
 * Grammatical errors such as "a anthro", incorrect then/than, and unnecessary capitalization exist.
 * There are run-on sentences sprinkled through here.
 * There's a nice big block of text at the top, but after that it just falls short.
 * This article is incredibly top-heavy.
 * With that much description, it's time to break it up into smaller subsections, methinks.
 * Why in the great blue sea would they give her a name like that?
 * Gradient scales are cool, and color changes on a whim are always nice *cough*
 * I like the idea of acid that can be imbued with magic for extra effect.
 * The traits attributed to a reptilian mind have nothing to do with a reptilian mind. What?
 * Dying her clothes to be the same color as her body would not give a more natural look, especially if her scales can and do change color.

Most importantly here, get someone to check that grammar. Make sure you're not including logical fallacies. See if you can fill out the rest of the sections to prevent the article from looking like a mushroom.

~The Second (talk) 11:35, September 4, 2017 (UTC)