Thread:RedzCzerwony/@comment-26242189-20160627193200

Stay Determined!

But, the real reason I'm here is to help you. Your pages are pretty good, and have fairly good concepts behind them, but they need to be a minimium of THREE paragraphs. Both your pages do not fill these requirements. Also, may I reccomend a W.I.P. sign at the top? Like for example, Grandma Calibri.

Just some advice. Thanks for reading :3 