Talk:Gavin/@comment-27311835-20170111194237/@comment-27081719-20170112152412

Yeah, many of these, I got critiqued for in the past. That is why I'm looking to create a new OC in the future. Other than that, let me explain some problems you stated.

1. I get that a lot. NEXT

2. It happens VERY. RARELY. Like, almost never.

3. Slade? Is that joo?

4. He summons attacks and other such thigs similar to what the game characters would USE. That help?

5. I don't think I should add categories. The description in different paragraphs already seperates it enough, so it's readable enough. Thanks for the advice, however. I may consider that for my new OC.

6. And they don't stop comin', and they don't stop comin', and they NUTSHACK.

Thank you for your input, o holy PBT.