Thread:TheSecondEdgeOfTheBlade/@comment-31395005-20170529083942/@comment-26273552-20170529100550

Even with just a glance at this, I can tell that it does not meet the page guidelines. Please make sure that it reaches the minimum of 20 sentences (excluding ACTs, quotes, and other filler) at the very least, and then look through the guidelines to fix whatever other issues it may have.