Talk:How to Write an Original AU/@comment-34064085-20180327024157

I'm making an AU, but I'm not sure what to call it. It's basically what would happen if Asriel and Chara never died (with a little twist: Chara is good and a female.) I'll write down the plot.

''A slice of pie can change everything... ''

Right when Asriel is about to lose hope of saving Chara, he remembers that Butterscotch Pie heals all HP. He thens proceeds to feed Chara pie. She wakes up and hugs Asriel.

Years later, Patience arrives. Asriel, Toriel, and Asgore greet them welcomingly, but Chara is scared of them. Eventually, Patience turns on the four and attacks Asriel. Chara, in tears, fights Patience. Chara wins and puts Patience's soul in a container. She feels bad about it afterwards, though Patience just tried to kill her best friend. After this, monsters were unsure whether or not to trust humans, but with Bravery, they came to a conclusion that not all humans are good or bad.

A century later, Toriel and Asgore pass away due to old age. Chara and Asriel are devastated, and Chara absorbs their souls, becoming very powerful. With Asgore and Toriel gone, Asriel and Chara ruled the Underground. Because of this, the Amalgamates were never created. The 4 humans that came after Patience and Bravery were not fought and instead died of natrual causes.

Then, Frisk falls. Their adventure is affected by the absence of Asgore and Toriel, and the fact that Asriel and Chara became rulers of the underground. This is when an RP of this AU would begin.

So, have an idea for the name of the AU? Also, what is the Cringe Factor?