Thread:JamesTechno998/@comment-25726032-20170116010142/@comment-25726032-20170120033420

Well, I've catched quite a few issues upon closer examination, and we can break it all down right here. The page will be re-marked for different reasons.

"She can take on any foe with a single swift" It's fine if she can 1v1 anyone. I don't think it's fine however if she can one-shot anyone, it's not right mate. Especially with the nerfed stats.

"Her attacks are difficult to dodge and she will bring your HP to 1 with a single hit." I think you should nerf this down a bit more. Undyne and Mettaton have similar stats, and they can only deal so much damage. So I suggest you should change the second part.

"attacking her only deals -0.01 damage to her health." Okay, she no longer has insanely high DF either, so she shouldn't really be taking so little damage either.

From what I see here, 4th-wall breaking OCs aren't allowed, specifically ones that are self-aware that they're in a game. Ones that are self-aware of the timeline can be good, same for those who can manipulate the menu and such. However, I do suggest you try rehauling her in terms of the 4th-wall, and I'll have Jaz help out soon enough.