Talk:How to Write an Original AU/@comment-32420879-20180519211350


 * Le desk slam* Wreckedtale.

Plot: Someone attempted a Genocide route, but they were quickly killed off by Flowey. Flowey, being so desperate for a soul, absorbed it. But since it was a Hatred soul, he became a corrupted version of himself (Asriel). With a human soul on hand, he started producing radiation, as it works differently for plants (I think).

Goal: Either show compassion, help these pained monsters, and return "Asriel" to himself, or be a soulless creature, kill everything, and join forces with "Asriel."

Characters:

Frisk: Human

Chara: Gives advice at SAVEs instead of the determination quotes. Actually kind of merciful.

Flowey: If you didn't get the plot, he became an evil Asriel. more on that in the Asriel thing.

Toriel: She was caught in the radiation and is much weaker than in the original game. Her attacks are now forming smoke to prevent the player from seeing the bullet box and firing a few small fireballs.

Amphibbit: Froggit was also caught in the radiation, but instead of being weakened, it grew stronger. I wanna make character designs now.

Whimsiege: See the description for Amphibbit. The suffix of its name is derived from the Siege Perilous, or the empty seat at the round table. It was originally a Whimsun.

Opthalemew: See the description for Amphibbit. Its name comes from a mixture of the word opthalmic, or relating to the eyes, and the name Bartholemew. It was originally a Loox.

(I'm not gonna keep doing this for the entire thing, so I'll probably make a page about it.)

Sans: Again, radiation. The force of the radiation put Papyrus and Sans into a coma, letting them freeze for a while. By the time they awoke, all of the warmth in Snowdin had been used up.

Papyrus: See the description for Sans.

Colecanf: Undyne was killed by the radiation, so an even less forgiving fish took over. His weapon is a scimitar.

(Alphys is not present in the game, as she committed suicide after Undyne died.)

Mettaton: As a robot, the radiation did not have much effect on Mettaton, but since Alphys died, Mettaton took over Alphys's role.

Asgore: See Toriel's description. Asgore has way more complicated attacks than Toriel, being able to shoot small flurries of fireballs and an attack similar to MTT's disco ball attack, but with blue and orange instead of blue and white.

Asriel: He's basically just evil. Just take what you'd expect from Chara on a murder spree and mix it with a goat. Boom.

Omega Asriel: Instead of a TV, an 80's PC is used for the head.

So, what do you blokes think?