Thread:Golden Forge/@comment-25926749-20160411225818

I need a bit of review for my story...It was that thing I was talking about on the AU page. So...By the way, these events are in chronological order, for some reason.
 * Gaster, like I mentioned, had a bit of a big role in this. He made the Skeletons, like Traitor's headcannon, as servants to build the CORE. They rebelled after it's building because of the nature of their existence.
 * Gaster then invented Wingdings, a sign language that, if done a certain way, casts magic. Particularly, he used it to keep the skeletons in check, but eventually, they learned it, and managed to remove all their memories of the incident. Only a few skeletons know of the nature of their existence, and they each went their separate ways.
 * The scientist remembered that he did build the CORE, however, and he was proud of the fact he brought electricity into the Underground. He felt as though he lost his scientific touch, however, and decided to try and build a machine that would solve death...

That's...all I have so far. More is with the Enforcers, though...

I'm just looking for criticism, good or bad. 