Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-43779122-20200209203959/@comment-35757757-20200209224655

(Well, the thing is that this isn't a bad personality... it's just that you never really showed it. You kept having him suddenly become a bad*ss out of nowhere to the point where he didn't act the way his personality would dictate. Always keep a character's personality in mind when you write how they act, or just whenever you write anything with them at all. Try to keep them in character, otherwise they just end up without personalities at all)