Talk:Kemuri/@comment-34822941-20180518000800

Yo what's popping guys it's ya boi White Kid Eating KFC and today we are gonna be looking over Kemuri LET'S GO

Mistakes: 9/10 | Most mistakes are absent, however I did notice that it was said "Kemuri's parents were killed when he was nine. He has no other living relatives.", despite it saying in his history that he was ten when it happened.

Backstory: 7/10 | Pretty good, although I think the residents thinking a ten year old killed his parents is a bit questionable.

Personality: 10/10 | Absolute perfection. If this personality was a meal, it'd be freaking delicious. No cliches here, not an undying friend maker, not a kindhearted, selfless do-gooder, just a little fugitive boy.

Appearance: 8.5/10 | Good appearance overall, but I think there should be a bit more uniqueness to it.

Overall: 9.5/10 | Great OC Overall.