Talk:Derek/@comment-28045617-20160218061058

the rinmaru pic is kinda cringe but thats not criticism lets get right into it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Pros:

+ Page is decently long

+ Pretty organized page layout

+ Detailed for the most part

Cons:

- Un-original

- According to trivia, is invincible.

- Friends with everyone

- "Derek puts his hands into his jacket." "always laid back and lazy" is literally just Sans

- "UNKNOWN" "uNKNOWN" "SORRY CAN'T DO THAT"

- Time traveler who remembers the timelines more than Flowey, although Flowey probably remembers the most that you can get, if Derek can bypass the True Reset, that makes him remember more than flowey, yet that defeats the point of a "True Reset".

You need to work on this page alot.