Board Thread:Roleplaying Boards/@comment-26273552-20161105143616/@comment-26821421-20161108021541

(... Dude, you can't just have him be anywhere you want him to be. You have to actually have him travel to the places instead of just saying 'He's at location x' and then 10 minutes later, without saying anything about it, say 'He's at location y.' You have to have him actually transition to that location, not just be there for the convinience of it.)

 He moved to the right... Getting hit in the shoulder. This dislocated his shoulder and caused him to spin. He used his non-dislocated hand to quickly grab his gun, pointing it at where he was assaulted from and firing once, causing his arm to recoil into the air. He was going into a state of panic. The one bullet he fired missed horribly, landing in the ground 5 meters beside where Craig was.