Talk:How to Write an Original AU/@comment-34064085-20180327024157/@comment-33241933-20180414213610

Hey! I know I'm late, but this is really cool. (Better than mine, lol..)

Can you give me a quick explanation based on roles? I'm confused about who is the caretaker of the Ruins and who is at the castle, if anyone. My current idea is that both Asriel and Chara are sitting by each other on the throne, but I'm not sure how a human gets through the Ruins without a tu-Toriel...

The cringe rating, in my opinion, is 0 (if not negative) - you've got a non-Gaster-centered universe, nobody is truly swapping roles, I don't see any crossover, and there's no OCs that I can see. One huge plus for me is the butterfly effect you've given the characters, due to Chara and Asriel staying alive. You've also added realism, with the pie healing full HP (the actual amount), Asgore and Toriel dying since they have children, and a few monsters rebelling.

All in all, out of 10? I rate your AU the full 10.

As for a name, that really depends! Do you want a pun, a clever name? Something original, something wacky, something that rolls off the tongue? I have ideas, but I need you to be a small bit more specific. :)