Thread:Ananasz/@comment-31146949-20170105005955/@comment-25726032-20170105203903

Here's a few suggestions for you, according to what others think with a bit of my insight. I've been doing some research on this Wiki and the main Undertale Wiki for an extensive analysis.

First off, even if Damy has had centuries to kill common animals, it's still nowhere near enough to reach such a ridiculously high LV. Why would that be? The EXP required to level up rises exponentially each time. To go from LV 1-2, you only need 10 EXP. To go from LV 19-20, you need 49999 EXP. So... it's just impossible, very much impossible. Unless of course Damy can break the game. So I suggest you take down the LV a lot. The highest that I can really find to be reasonable over centuries, is something like LV 100.

Also, I'm seeing this statement about all Monsters being instantly sent to the Underground simultaneously through summoning. In a sense, that's essentially teleportation, AKA not allowed. It really doesn't allow for OCs like Teli to exist either, as they would end up forced into the Underground by this process. My headcanon is that almost all Monsters were in a single kingdom nearby the Humans, except for a few like Teli's group and the South African group. So I suggest something about that is done.

Now, I will say this. While there are some... big issues, I can say that the page isn't really that bad at all. I gotta say, it's got some interesting features in it. The art is definitely great, I can say that much. In fact, I think you should try doing some roleplaying with him. If you don't want to, that's fine. I'll be expecting a response soon enough, and if there's anything I need to add, I will either make another reply or edit this one.