Talk:Ray/@comment-26273552-20181201160013

I'm really liking this page. It's headed in the right direction, and I can see myself nominating it for FA in a couple months if you keep it up. I do have a few things to note though:
 * You might want to reread the policy and make a few small vocabulary tweaks on the page so you don't toe the line. I'm specifically looking at this line from the policy: "Disallowed species: Multidimensional beings, 'real' demons and angels"
 * Definitely add stats! Nobody ever actually uses them for RP as far as I know, but Undertale is a game with stats in it, so I would recommend that you include that to bring this all together.
 * Continue to bulk it up! While I definitely prefer quality over quantity, I think there's more you can do with this character. Never be afraid to keep working on this and expanding it.