Talk:Miya/@comment-25726032-20170304224802

I suppose it's time for my next review. This time, I'll be using square roots.

Length/Completion/Format: √25, 5/10. I suppose it is complete, but there isn't really much to the page as opposed to others. There are three main paragraphs, and that's really about it. Three of the sections and the infobox are mostly blank. It is formatted correctly however. Overall, you really just need to add more.

Design/Concept: √64, 8/10. I'll give you credit, there was some effort put into the description of the character. We haven't really seen an Agarif in pants before, so there's a first. The thing is, you take away the clothes and it's just another Agarif, really. The abilities are fine, the personality is fine, but I'd really like to see another non-Agarif OC man, or at least more detail put into this one.

Plot/Backstory: √16, 4/10. There isn't really much backstory or plot to this character, other than she's an orphan that doesn't know her parents, and she's being hunted down to be experimented on. Really, a lot more detail needs to be added, and probably under a separate heading too. Not to mention the fact that this is another orphaned Monster.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: √100, 10/10. The grammar, spelling, and all other qualities of writing are good. This is the easiest category to describe, really.

RP Applicability: √81, 9/10. She is capable of carrying a plot on her own with the whole bounty situation, and she is also capable of being a background character and participate in normal RPs. However, since that her backstory and plot isn't really all that detailed, the carrying of her plot may not be all too effective, especially if more explanation is needed.

Overall, it's a 7.2/10, a C character. I suggest some more is added and fleshed out in this page, for a higher rating than this. A good page size ranges from 8000 to 20000 bytes, and a good plot/backstory is usually separate underneath a Backstory heading. Nevertheless, good job, and I hope this review helps.