Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-43779122-20200209203959/@comment-35757757-20200209210714

(Look, of course you're going to get criticism because PEOPLE WANT YOU TO IMPROVE. THEY MEAN WELL.

If you still think your character will be considered a Mary Sue, then try to fix the problems. Leaving them while being fully aware of them makes you look bad

Look, wanna know what you get when you take the time to rewrite characters and stories?

https://undertale-au.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:MML!opinions!Fun!Chocolate!/Dangerverse_Character_File:_Blue

Try going through the DV Files in order. I've rewritten this so many times that it barely resembles how it started. See the finished product?)