Talk:Lucas/@comment-44587979-20191204145741

May I have permission to fix some grammar mistakes?

I understand if you don't give me permission.

I'll just point the mistakes I found in this comment then.

The '[' and ']' are for showing the mistakes. the commas are for what you wrote, in case you get confused. I hope this helps.

'Read aloud, spells based on fire, ice, wind, earth, healing, darkness, lightning, and manipulation can be [casted]' cast

'Lucas's wings aren't normally visible, but once summoned, he is capable of [long distance] flight.' long-distance.

'He loves to read as if he never stopped reading ever since he was born, using it as a distraction on [occasion .]' occasion.

'He loves his [Sister] very much, but is usually driven insane by her ignoring of his words, always going into things [head first] into things while he prefers the Calculated, Logical, approach to things.'

sister, headfirst

'His wolf form is a [black gray] wolf, with nice fur and [red eye], his left still has an eye patch.'

black-gray, red-eye.

'In his wolf form, he's still mostly collected and logical unless threatened. He loves the scent and taste of bone[,] and rotten flesh in this form.'

You do not need to put a comma there, but it's your choice ultimately.

'Gender and [Prounouns]' Pronouns

'Lucas [as stated before] is very logical, collected, and calculated, while also usually being mostly to himself.'  as, stated before,

'When it comes [ot] his sister Lola, his patience runs dry very quickly.'

When it comes to his sister Lola, his patience runs dry very quickly.

'Once he [is starts] suffering from Blood Withdraw, he starts to lose control, becoming easily angered, violent, and evil.'  starts

'Read aloud, spells based on fire, ice, wind, earth, healing, darkness, lightning, and manipulation can be [casted].'

cast.

'Lucas's wings aren't normally visible, but once summoned, he is capable of [long distance] flight.'

long-distance