Thread:Calibri-Chan/@comment-44076434-20191105171353/@comment-44002022-20191113210021

I do like the concept of the OC, but a few things could be better.

first, the page is really sloppy and could be organized better (i.e. capitalization) so it looks a little neater. also, I would be pleased if I got more information on the Air Knight. Also also, the pages contents are a bit scattered so it makes it difficult to see what's going on. in terms of character, though, I think Air Knight is a fantastic OC, but needs to be developed more. Nice work!