Thread:Hazerino/@comment-26273552-20160911203218/@comment-27172748-20160912090619

Ehh, I have noticed a few mistakes. The grammar, spelling and punctuation are inadequate, the character is a bit of a Mary Sue, as the page states that Myke is friends with Frisk, ALL the monsters and Chara, even though Chara is dead. They also enjoy "hanging out with sans", even though Myke is a human. If you do think about it, the page is still very short. That one big paragraph would only really make 1 paragraph. There are only 3 sentences in that paragraph.