Talk:Slade/@comment-25726032-20170319022141

Alright, it's time for me to do my next review. This time, I'm doing just the numbers. Feeling tired atm.

Length/Completion/Format: 10/10. I think his length is just about right for a page like this. A lot more could be added, but it's all good! Every section is also complete, and the format is in line with other pages. It's good.

Design/Concept: 9/10. The design of Slade is rather original, and I think it's one of the best for a humanoid character. The appearance is great, the personality is good, but there isn't really much put into his battle. You could say his battle's a bit cliched too. But, still good!

Plot/Backstory: 9/10. The backstory's great, and it seems to have a contrast to how most other backstories work out. It's not dramatic or tragic, it's just random. However, I do feel like more detail could be added to it, and maybe an explanation of how he entered the Underground. Just saying.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 10/10. All of your writing is on point. Enough said.

RP Applicability: 10/10. Slade is capable of carrying a plot of his own with the Iblis species, and he's very easily capable of being a side character too. He's everything that an RP Character could do. He can change the focus of an RP, not affect at all, be the main focus, or just remain in the background. All good here.

Overall, it's a 9.6. This means your OCs doing very well, and I think that's very good. Some improvements could be made, but there is a reason why this OC's considered a classic nowadays. VERY great improvement, man! Keep it up!