Thread:SplazinBear/@comment-28931472-20161207012558/@comment-25726032-20161208034020

I got some ideas man.

Well first off, Destinie is capable of teleportation. Right off the bat, that's against the rules. So yeah, remove that.

Destinie is also capable of telekinesis on people from my stand point. Using it on objects to a certain degree can be fine, but not on people. No-no man, don't do it.

On the teleportation part, portals are pretty much OP as a whole. Don't let Destinie be capable of opening portals, man. Especially dimension-crossing ones.

Accessing SAVE files is pretty much a canon feature, but it shouldn't really be used or abused at all. Besides, with the presence of other Humans, she shouldn't be able to use it. Unless of course she has supreme power over them... which is without a doubt, batshit OP.

Two different colored eyes...? https://hydra-media.cursecdn.com/smite.gamepedia.com/3/3b/Tyr_Laugh_g.ogg. That may not be against the rules, but my GOD it's a bad cliche man.

Two special Souls? C'mon now man, those just sound like excuses to give her lots of power. I suggest you either stick to the basics, or just have one unique but standard-colored Soul.

Etherealism as a whole tends to be... OP, depending on how people depict it. You may not want to go that route.

As for story, don't tie your characters to major canon characters. And for the love of god, especially not Gaster. A Gaster-Involved backstory can be just cringy as fuck man.

The quick healing abilities? I don't know how quick she can heal, so you may have to define how quick she heals. If it's POOF you're healed now, it's OP. So yeah, elaborate on that.

Anyways, that's some things you can fix. Hope this helps.