Talk:Rook/@comment-26426764-20160119162413

Simply put- a masterpiece. There's so many things this page does right, it's hard to pick one of them to begin on.

The words used are absolutely extravagant. His story is magnificent, and even without an image, the words used clearly showed his appearance.

Usually, relationships with canon characters are not a good thing for characters, unless done right. You seem to have done just that with Rook. Though perhaps something could be done about the end of the True Pacifist route, where Monster Kid, too, idolizes Papyrus. Perhaps the two become unlikely friends?

The fact that you put in the alternate timeline versions of him in the page made it all the more better. It's so interesting to read about the Underswap and Underfell versions of characters, they are definitely two of my favorite AUs.

Finally, the concept of a chess-monster is very creative, I love stuff based on things like that. This page is an instant 10/10, one of the greatest creations on the Wiki. Great job on the character!