Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-43779122-20191214010916/@comment-35757757-20191219040206

(I can come up with a rewrite idea pretty quickly

Like, say:

Timber and Elli are brothers. However, Elli was twisted into darkness because of jealousy due to being constantly ignored by everyone else. Like, they never even seemed like they were able to hear him. However, he still cares about Timber... it’s just that Timber doesn’t realize this...

There, simple and effective!

Though I guess this focused more on Elli XD

Honestly I had more of an idea for a personality rewrite:

Timber is kind and passionate, but can be a jerk without realizing it and has trouble empathizing with others. He often needs others to point out whenever he did something wrong, and it can be hard to convince him. However, he still has a heart of gold deep down.

Basically, combining Jerk With A Heart Of Gold and Innocently Insensitive. That’s what I thought of XD

Is it good?}