Thread:CatFan07/@comment-26821421-20171102125032/@comment-26821421-20171102130642

There are still a few problems.

1, still too short. You need at least 3 paragraphs, 20 sentences, and 2,500 bytes.

2, Still too overpowered. He no longer has teleportation, but there are still a large myriad of abilities that can't be justified at this point. He's able to summon a weapon, use telekinesis, fire lasers from his eyes, consume SOULs, possess corpses, AND become unhittable for a period of time. At a certain point, stack ability on ability makes an enemy virtually impossible to kill, and it's at this point you've already reached.