Talk:Ina/@comment-25726032-20170304185300

Alright, time for the Part 3 of Forge's Reviews. Can we bang out 69,420 likes on this video? Anyways, the rating scale will be a Like/Dislike ratio.

Length/Completion/Format: 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍, 10/10. The page is complete for sure, along with a great length and such. The formatting is also on point, and the tabbers were also handled rather well. My only issue is the lack of detail with Universe Mu Ina, but I suppose you don't need to really concentrate on that.

Design/Concept: 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍 👎, 9/10. On appearance, she is completely unique as opposed to several other designs. It isn't sexualized at all, and doesn't have the same basis as other Fish monsters. While her personality of being rather shy could be considered a cliche, I don't mind it much, and it's not the main definition of her character. Her MafiaTale personality and appearance is fucking awesome though, I can say that much.

Plot/Backstory:  👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👎 👎, 8/10. Her backstory is rather fine, I suppose. I do however have two main issues. One of course, is that she's an orphaned child, we certainly have a lot of those. Secondly is... why did her mother leave anyways? There has to be a reason, and I'd be glad if there was an RP to explain that. The MafiaTale story however makes up for this, and I really do love the part where she kills Needleteeth and takes over.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:  👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍,  10/10. As expected, all of your grammar, spelling, and other qualities of writing were spot-on. Not much more to really say.

RP Applicability:  👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👎 👎, 8/10. She can be applied in nearly any RP there is, but there is one problem. There isn't really any plot for her to carry on her own, and this can be problematic for when a plot is needed. Her mother may have some plot potential however, and she can easily carry a plot in the MafiaTale world, considering she now controls one of the main gangs.

Personally, Ina isn't one of my favorite characters, but that doesn't mean she isn't a good character. She's well written, has a unique appearance, and has a completely different premise in certain AUs. There's a reason why people like her, and overall, I'd give a 9/10 right here. Good job!