Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-43779122-20191210014956/@comment-35757757-20191212042012

He revived himself as a small child. I think he can pull it off. Also, that ??? Guy is obviously him

I just feel... cheated. Honestly, if that WAS Timber, things could’ve been way more interesting. He realizes that he was being a huge jerk without justification, and tries to atone for his mistakes. That’s WAY better than constantly crying over stuff that wasn’t his fault yet whenever he DOES do something bad there’s some sort of “excuse”... even when there wasn’t, like with the soul thing. I know people blame themselves for wasn’t their fault sometimes, but if when they actually DID do something wrong they were somehow not held guilty, even by themselves it seems with the soul thing again... that just peeves me off. It feels like he’s trying to get cheap sympathy points, yet he’s just kinda unintentionally unsympathetic in the process.

(Note, Espino: This character rant isn’t about you. I don’t even have the right to criticize you as a person, and I wouldn’t want to anyways. You’re not a bad person. Far from it from what I know of you. However, I AM allowed to give your fictional character some criticism. I’m trying to keep it as constructive criticism, though. It’s there to help you improve.

This stuff just frustrates me is all

I’m putting this note here because of what you said earlier about feeling like criticism for your character=personal attacks. It’s not. If someone were to criticize Sans Undertale, they’re not attacking Toby Fox. Just his character}