Thread:TheSecondEdgeOfTheBlade/@comment-32323755-20170907190538/@comment-26273552-20170907195617

Your WIP protection lasts for one week relative to the time you placed it.

The issues are...
 * Too short
 * Make sure that your page is at least 3 paragraphs, 20 sentences, and 2500 bytes.
 * No ownership claimed
 * I suggest using the Property template at the top of your page.
 * Possible canon tampering (Setting out strict date of birth and age, therefore forcing 201X to be within a more specific range)
 * I highly advise against using exact dates, since Undertale is set in an indistinct year. Looks like you already fixed this issue.
 * Bordering on direct relation to canon characters
 * This one isn't so much something I can actually mark your page for, but I do advise against making your OC too close to canon characters. People here tend not to like it very much.

Most importantly here, you're going to need to pump a lot more content into that page in the next week. Looks like you've already got a plan for more sections, so that shouldn't be all too hard. Best of luck!