Talk:Michael Carter/@comment-25379442-20170115231540

Welp, you wanted me to review, so, here I go.

The description and appearance is good, saying that is not canon was a good sign

I have my doubts about W.D. Gaster appearing (or at least, I think it is Gaster), but the fact that he doesn't really changes a lot in the own character's story, really gives a sort of "Mystery", which is pretty nice

Melting into an Amalgamate form after contact with an Amalgamate is quite genius, that I admit, though I still think it's...very weird. Of course, It might not mean that it's bad since most RPs doesn't happens in the True Lab, but such power can lead many doubts...That's bad? Not really, That's more depending in the situation/roleplayers around.

The friend list is pretty fine, nothing really against the canon...until ASGORE. ASGORE, just like in the game, is mentioned many times before being the final boss, which means that The Human could only know and have their thoughts about ASGORE in the way they want, before actually meeting him, of course, there is that form of saying that he knew ASGORE for some reason because "all events and monsters are familiar" (aka Beating the Game for the First Time)

Personality is just fine. I understand how it feels to have more negative traits than positive in your OC--

The battle dialogs and flavor texts are pretty nice (specially the Stop making that face. Loved that one)

Since this is getting too big, I'll tell already: The rest is all good, and the Dagger's lore makes the fact that he has it, is pretty fair. '''You took the challenge of making a Human character and you did quite nicely. Good work.'''